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1）结构上分四段，首段介绍现状和对未来职业的描述；第二段说明不选某种职业的理由（两点或三点），第三段说明可选某种职业的理由（两点或三点），结尾段总结重申个人观点。
2）合理使用衔接词，如so，instead，all in all等。
3）恰当使用高级句式，增加得分点。如表语从句，同位语从句等。
One really good point about your job is that you don’t have to leave home.
I’m sorry to say that you won’t become a pilot as you wanted. In the future, large passenger airplanes will fly themselves and won’t need pilots. But there is a big problem in the future that you don’t have now: no one uses cars anymore—— they use personal jet packs. As you can imagine, the skies over the city get pretty busy! Someone needs to control all these people so they don’t have accidents. And that’s what you do: you’re a jet pack air traffic controller.
One really good point about your job is that you don’t have to leave home. Instead, you’ll use a virtual reality headset and microphone to do your job while you are sitting on the sofa drinking tea. But you will have to work on your people skills, as you will be talking to people all day. The bad point? Too many jet packs in the sky! Sometimes it can be kind of tense, and some people don’t like to obey the rules or be told what to do.
All in all, I think you’ll be happy with this job. But of course you will, because you’re me! Stop worrying! Your future is going to be great. Trust me.
如今我们可在有生之年过豪华生活了。
Now we’ll be able to live in luxury for the rest of our lives.
我们的新学校有令人兴奋的前景。
Our new school has an exciting prospect.
没有了猫，老鼠数量增加。
In the absence of cats，the mice population also grew quickly.
